Thursday, October 29, 2009
Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Writer's Workshop
Cleaning the House
I cleaned the house with my mom. I cleaned the living room. I picked up scraps a lot. I went down stairs. I said, I will help you mom. My mom took a rest on the couch. I use the vacuum and cleaned and took a rest. Then my mom went to clean the bathroom. I woke up and helped my mom.
(24)
My Life
My mom old me that a stroke means his brain is bleeding, so we went shopping for my dad. I missed my dad a lot. I remember when we surprised me. I was talking about my dad.
My brother was in school. My dad was supposed to pick him up. He did not come back. My dad drove all the way to Brooklyn Park because he was sick, he had a stroke! he went to the emergency hospital. Water was dripping from my sisters eyes. I felt sad for her. I tried to make her happy.
(1)
The Super Fast Water Slide
I went swimming with Victoria and Marisa. I went down the slide, don don don... before I knew it, wooosh. I went speeding down the slide. I went again and again. I went 19 times. I had an awesome time going down the slide! Then there was a safety break, then we went to get a snack. After the safety break I went back on the water slide again and again and again. Then I wanted to go so I said to my mom, “Can I go one more time please mom?”
“Thank you,” I said after we went home. I had a fun time going swimming.
(?)
My Grandma’s
I got to go to my Grandma’s house! I felt great. I really wanted to go. Now we finally went. I was bouncing in my seat. We got some lunch and got McDonald’s. We got there . I jumped out the open door and said hi. I said hi and bounced outside and I saw the garden. I saw all the vegetables. They looked good. I went back then suddenly someone opened up the door. It was my auntie and uncle Austin and these girls came in. I said, What is your name? The two girls said there names. One girl’s name was Alley and the other girl’s name was Katie. I said my name was Barb. I said what is your age? And they said 5 and 6. My age is 7 too and that was very cool.
(3)
I cleaned the house with my mom. I cleaned the living room. I picked up scraps a lot. I went down stairs. I said, I will help you mom. My mom took a rest on the couch. I use the vacuum and cleaned and took a rest. Then my mom went to clean the bathroom. I woke up and helped my mom.
(24)
My Life
My mom old me that a stroke means his brain is bleeding, so we went shopping for my dad. I missed my dad a lot. I remember when we surprised me. I was talking about my dad.
My brother was in school. My dad was supposed to pick him up. He did not come back. My dad drove all the way to Brooklyn Park because he was sick, he had a stroke! he went to the emergency hospital. Water was dripping from my sisters eyes. I felt sad for her. I tried to make her happy.
(1)
The Super Fast Water Slide
I went swimming with Victoria and Marisa. I went down the slide, don don don... before I knew it, wooosh. I went speeding down the slide. I went again and again. I went 19 times. I had an awesome time going down the slide! Then there was a safety break, then we went to get a snack. After the safety break I went back on the water slide again and again and again. Then I wanted to go so I said to my mom, “Can I go one more time please mom?”
“Thank you,” I said after we went home. I had a fun time going swimming.
(?)
My Grandma’s
I got to go to my Grandma’s house! I felt great. I really wanted to go. Now we finally went. I was bouncing in my seat. We got some lunch and got McDonald’s. We got there . I jumped out the open door and said hi. I said hi and bounced outside and I saw the garden. I saw all the vegetables. They looked good. I went back then suddenly someone opened up the door. It was my auntie and uncle Austin and these girls came in. I said, What is your name? The two girls said there names. One girl’s name was Alley and the other girl’s name was Katie. I said my name was Barb. I said what is your age? And they said 5 and 6. My age is 7 too and that was very cool.
(3)
Monday, October 5, 2009
Writing 1
King Sized Cotton
I and my friend went to the Mall of America. It was awesome. I got a king size cotton candy and it was good and I fainted because it was so good. They took me to the nurse and they fixed me up. After I woke up me and my friend went too wild.
(6)
The Tree House Adventure
I went to my cousin’s house because my mom and dad had an adult party. For dinner we had pizza and chicken nuggets. The next morning they shoed me their tree house. The berries were edible so we picked some before we ate any. We washed them first and then we ate them. Then my brother and my cousin got more wood nails and a hammer. We pounded down some branches. We invited Ben V. and we had an adventure.
(11)
The Playing
I was playing because I wanted to. My mom went to me and my mom said can I play with you.
(13)
The Store
My mom take me to the store and by a new shoe, shirt, candy, scarf, pants, gloves, apples, juice then we go home. The next morning my dad and my mom we go to see my aurnties then go outside and play then we go home. The next morning I ride my bike . It was fun to ride.
(25)
The Bike Ride to the Coon Rapids Dam
My family is going to the Coon Rapids Dam. We all take off on our bikes. We ride past houses. We come to a stop. We keep on going. We saw a TV on the side of the road. We go on a trial. The leaves fall upon us. We stop to get a drink and I take a sip. I found a dead bee on me. The wind was blowing in my face. My hair was swinging through the air. I keep pedaling my feet were getting tired. I saw a park. My bike was getting out of balance. We came to a stop. “We’re almost there,” said my mom. My pedals on my bike were going faster and faster across the trail. The wheels were going round and round. My hands were holding on tight.
Sweat was dripping down my face. We finally got there. We rode our bikes on the cement. The water falls were streaming down the water falls. There were fishermen at the side.
Our bicycle wheels turned around as we rode slowly across the sidewalk. As we rode across we turned onto a different sidewalk as awe stop to make a decision which way to go. My dad fixed my seat because it was crooked. His had touched my seat as it turned. Cars were going passed us. My little brother started talking in baby language. Our bikes started moving again and we went a different way than we went before. We pass tree. I looked ahead of me and we were getting closer. I was getting happier and happier. We rode to the rocks in our driveway. I get off my bike. I took a step on the grass and went in the shed to park my bike.
(18)
Daisy
I went to Daisy Camp and someone got sick and it was my friend Alana! She and my friend Emma were in a room with two beds but Emma wasn’t sick. She was just helping her. So no one was going to get sick. They finally got out and they had lunch and dinner with us and then they went back in. When it was time to leave they came out and I went back home. I was tired and I went to sleep. The next day I went to school. I brought my Daisy bag and talked about my bag and the next day I went to my Daisies and we did a skit because we were doing it for our moms. We were going to do it by the next Thursday. I was so excited I was jumping for joy. I couldn’t wait for Thursday and then I got a gumball. I got green and then Amber’s mom drove me home and I got on the TV. I watched a cool show. I did not know what I was watching. It was a girl show.
Oh my goodness I was tired. I needed a nap. I went to brush my teeth and I went to bed. I heard something. I thought it was a ghost. I wasn’t afraid. I knew it was my cat Emily. She jumped on my bed and she tickled my feet with her claws. She crawled around my neck. It tickled. She meowed. Cats are funny ha, ha. Then she dropped on the floor.
(3)
Facing Ben
On Saturday I faced Ben’s flag football team. They were really good but at the second Noah got a touchdown. Then it was 6 to 12. I got a flag. It was fourth down and they went for a big bomb. He passed it and they caught it but I got the quarterbacks flag just before he threw it. Once they did a reverse somebody was blocking me but I got his flag so we won.
(20)
SCUBA
I went SCUBA diving. I really saw whales when I went SCUBA diving. Did you know that? A whales spine is 2 times bigger than our spine. Our spine is so small it is probably 5 inches. Did you know that girls are smarter than boys? It is true.
(9)
Practice Swimming
I went swimming at Jackson Middle School. I was shy. I took all my clothes off except my swimming pants. I went in the water. It was cold. I got into it. I was warm. I practiced. We all went to Walmart. We bought a lot of stuff. We paid them and then we went home.
(24)
Rainy Rainy Splash Splash on my head.
(14)
Soccer
We were playing soccer and I had the ball and then Will took the ball and he shot the ball but he missed and got in Brandon’s face. Then I got the ball and I made a score!!!
(26)
Night Wrestle
Once I had a sleepover at my Grandma’s house. When were about to wake up we wrestled in bed.
(10)
School Mystery
I was just getting out of school when I remembered it was Friday. So I went to the front office and looked for my dad… He wasn’t there DUN! DUN! DUN! So I went outside and walked to my daycare and my dad picked me up.
(19)
My Dog
Me and my family wanted a dog so bad I tell you!! So we went to a house. We saw a real cute dog! He was so cute! My mom asked me and my sister if we wanted him. Of course I wanted him and my sister wanted him too! My mom thought he was cute! And my dad thought he was cute too! SO we got him and his name is Toby!!
(14)
I and my friend went to the Mall of America. It was awesome. I got a king size cotton candy and it was good and I fainted because it was so good. They took me to the nurse and they fixed me up. After I woke up me and my friend went too wild.
(6)
The Tree House Adventure
I went to my cousin’s house because my mom and dad had an adult party. For dinner we had pizza and chicken nuggets. The next morning they shoed me their tree house. The berries were edible so we picked some before we ate any. We washed them first and then we ate them. Then my brother and my cousin got more wood nails and a hammer. We pounded down some branches. We invited Ben V. and we had an adventure.
(11)
The Playing
I was playing because I wanted to. My mom went to me and my mom said can I play with you.
(13)
The Store
My mom take me to the store and by a new shoe, shirt, candy, scarf, pants, gloves, apples, juice then we go home. The next morning my dad and my mom we go to see my aurnties then go outside and play then we go home. The next morning I ride my bike . It was fun to ride.
(25)
The Bike Ride to the Coon Rapids Dam
My family is going to the Coon Rapids Dam. We all take off on our bikes. We ride past houses. We come to a stop. We keep on going. We saw a TV on the side of the road. We go on a trial. The leaves fall upon us. We stop to get a drink and I take a sip. I found a dead bee on me. The wind was blowing in my face. My hair was swinging through the air. I keep pedaling my feet were getting tired. I saw a park. My bike was getting out of balance. We came to a stop. “We’re almost there,” said my mom. My pedals on my bike were going faster and faster across the trail. The wheels were going round and round. My hands were holding on tight.
Sweat was dripping down my face. We finally got there. We rode our bikes on the cement. The water falls were streaming down the water falls. There were fishermen at the side.
Our bicycle wheels turned around as we rode slowly across the sidewalk. As we rode across we turned onto a different sidewalk as awe stop to make a decision which way to go. My dad fixed my seat because it was crooked. His had touched my seat as it turned. Cars were going passed us. My little brother started talking in baby language. Our bikes started moving again and we went a different way than we went before. We pass tree. I looked ahead of me and we were getting closer. I was getting happier and happier. We rode to the rocks in our driveway. I get off my bike. I took a step on the grass and went in the shed to park my bike.
(18)
Daisy
I went to Daisy Camp and someone got sick and it was my friend Alana! She and my friend Emma were in a room with two beds but Emma wasn’t sick. She was just helping her. So no one was going to get sick. They finally got out and they had lunch and dinner with us and then they went back in. When it was time to leave they came out and I went back home. I was tired and I went to sleep. The next day I went to school. I brought my Daisy bag and talked about my bag and the next day I went to my Daisies and we did a skit because we were doing it for our moms. We were going to do it by the next Thursday. I was so excited I was jumping for joy. I couldn’t wait for Thursday and then I got a gumball. I got green and then Amber’s mom drove me home and I got on the TV. I watched a cool show. I did not know what I was watching. It was a girl show.
Oh my goodness I was tired. I needed a nap. I went to brush my teeth and I went to bed. I heard something. I thought it was a ghost. I wasn’t afraid. I knew it was my cat Emily. She jumped on my bed and she tickled my feet with her claws. She crawled around my neck. It tickled. She meowed. Cats are funny ha, ha. Then she dropped on the floor.
(3)
Facing Ben
On Saturday I faced Ben’s flag football team. They were really good but at the second Noah got a touchdown. Then it was 6 to 12. I got a flag. It was fourth down and they went for a big bomb. He passed it and they caught it but I got the quarterbacks flag just before he threw it. Once they did a reverse somebody was blocking me but I got his flag so we won.
(20)
SCUBA
I went SCUBA diving. I really saw whales when I went SCUBA diving. Did you know that? A whales spine is 2 times bigger than our spine. Our spine is so small it is probably 5 inches. Did you know that girls are smarter than boys? It is true.
(9)
Practice Swimming
I went swimming at Jackson Middle School. I was shy. I took all my clothes off except my swimming pants. I went in the water. It was cold. I got into it. I was warm. I practiced. We all went to Walmart. We bought a lot of stuff. We paid them and then we went home.
(24)
Rainy Rainy Splash Splash on my head.
(14)
Soccer
We were playing soccer and I had the ball and then Will took the ball and he shot the ball but he missed and got in Brandon’s face. Then I got the ball and I made a score!!!
(26)
Night Wrestle
Once I had a sleepover at my Grandma’s house. When were about to wake up we wrestled in bed.
(10)
School Mystery
I was just getting out of school when I remembered it was Friday. So I went to the front office and looked for my dad… He wasn’t there DUN! DUN! DUN! So I went outside and walked to my daycare and my dad picked me up.
(19)
My Dog
Me and my family wanted a dog so bad I tell you!! So we went to a house. We saw a real cute dog! He was so cute! My mom asked me and my sister if we wanted him. Of course I wanted him and my sister wanted him too! My mom thought he was cute! And my dad thought he was cute too! SO we got him and his name is Toby!!
(14)
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